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Thursday, October 2, 2014

Finding The Way


Finding The Way
Darkness flows throughout this world
Within the darkness there is hope
A hope to find an understanding
An inclination towards ambition
An ambition to discover
To discover everything in this world
To find The Way 





4 comments:

  1. Bella I like how your poem is concise, but still conveys a powerful message.

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  2. I really like the message of your poem. The picture also works really well.

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  3. I like how you take the word from the line before and use it in the next one.

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  4. This is touching, and I love the meaning of this poem.

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