Legend
Care for everything
you push yourself into nothing
Care for nothing
you pull yourself out of existance
Care for a cause
you have a belief
devote yourself to a cause
you have change
Choice can be indirect or insignificant
yet it is always defining
The Dao knows only his descisions
Thus he has all that matters
Time can be wasted or misused
yet it is most precious
The Dao submits himself to his passion
Thus his effect is great
Existence is finite
while change is eternal
Do not be a nothing
be a legend
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ReplyDeleteI like how the first two lines of every stanza contradict and compliment each other at the same time.
ReplyDeleteThis poem is very interesting, I like it. It makes you think but in the end it all draws together nicely. I enjoyed reading it and the message it sends.
ReplyDeleteI really like the simplicity with this poem because it still retains the same amount of feeling.
ReplyDeleteThe way the specific words of your stanzas contradict each other creates a nice tone.
ReplyDeleteThis poem has a very strong message that seems like its something you really believe. The simplicity of it conveys the message well
ReplyDeleteThis poem conveys a really strong idea and uses strong words that construct an image in my head.
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