I like how you suggested what we should do and how to do it instead of just saying what we need to do in order to get back to your best state.
Your poem is very short and sweet- you get the message across without overdoing it. I also like how it flows similarly to the Tao poems.
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I like how you suggested what we should do and how to do it instead of just saying what we need to do in order to get back to your best state.
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