Keep calm,
and breathe.
Breathe in the Tao,
the oneness,
the wholeness,
and let go.
Let go of the
hatred and bias
and bring in the
peace and calm.
The Tao is everything,
and it is nothing.
It is light
and dark,
yin
and yang
yin
and yang
The Tao will show you the way
the path you need to walk
the path that will lead you
to peace.
I really like your poem! It really shows me what the Tao is and what it does. I also think the spacing in your poem makes the message more effective
ReplyDeleteyour poem sounds very authentic it sounds awesome :)
ReplyDeleteI like how it really integrates itself with the Tao
ReplyDeleteI like how your poem really shows balance and yin and yang
ReplyDeleteI like how the poem shows both sides equally in a balanced way and does a great way of representing the Tao.
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